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Day 4 Rocky Mountain Spring

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  • Apr 4
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Day 4 Rocky Mountain Spring

 

NaPoWriMo prompt:

“In his poem, “Spring Thunder,” Mark van Doren brings us a short, haunting evocation of weather and the change in seasons. Today, we’d like to challenge you to craft your own short poem that involves a weather phenomenon and some aspect of the season. Try using rhyme and keeping your lines of roughly even length.”

 

Pooh Bear wrote the perfect poem for the weather in my part of the world right now, but here’s my attempt.

 

Rocky Mountain Spring

 

Outdoor soccer starts in three weeks.

Shovelling in knee-high boots today

she laughs, creates icy mountain peaks.

 

Magpies flit past with sticks in their beaks,

home-building while hustling crows away.

Seducing spring with many shrieks.

 

Indoors she digs out shorts and cleats,

looks up drills for warm-up play.

She’ll be ready, come what may.

 

 

And here’s Pooh Bear’s:

 

The more it

SNOWS-tiddely-pom,

The more it

GOES-tiddely-pom

The more it

GOES-tiddely-pom

On

Snowing.

 

And nobody

KNOWS-tiddely-pom,

How cold my

TOES-tiddely-pom

How cold my

TOES-tiddely-pom

Are

Growing

 

From the House at Pooh Corner by A.A. Milne


Photo was taken in May 2021 at Lake Louise, Alberta.

 


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