Day 25 The Spruce Tree
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Na/GloPoWriMo prompt:
“In her poem, “The Apple Tree in Blossom,” Melissa Kwasny strings together several fantastical metaphors for the apple tree, before shifting into exclamations, definitions, and a series of nimble, tonal shifts – and seeming changes in topic – before circling around back to the apple tree. Today’s challenge asks you to write your own poem in which you use at least three metaphors for a single thing, include an exclamation, ruminate on the definition of a word, and come back in the closing line to the image or idea with which you opened the poem.”
Such a fun prompt (and poem example)!
The Spruce Tree
poses like a ballerina
pauses waiting for the next
breath. All the living
sheltered underneath leaving
signs: cobwebs, magpie nests, tree
sap which smells delicious and tastes
like dirt. A learning opportunity your
grandfather provides with great joy.
Sap: “the blood of plant life”, blood
relative after all, Grandpa!
“a simpleton,” perhaps
from “sapling” meaning a green
branch of the family tree, “to weaken
insidiously” as in your confidence
in the roots. Love pirouettes on
pine needles.


